If i were a Tear in Your Eye,
I would roll down onto Your Lips,

But

If You were a Tear in My Eye,
I would Never Cry,
For Fear of Losing You.

i am surprised no one like this short rhyme

Its lovely Piccyme - especially for someone who is in love.

It's just the older I get, the more cynical I become....

awwwwwwww Don't glad you liked it

cool

how many ways could i paint thee as thou art,
the glow of thy being,. the warmth of thine heart.
ps...dont be calling me an old softy, or i"ll sue.

Nice.

wish i knew the rest mac, but my old ma could recite it in total. i think it was a robbi burns creation.

lovely

Been having a look through Robbie Burns poems Billy..not found it yet but will keep looking,it sounds like a lovely poem...I didn't realise how many he'd wrote.

glad you liked it, cos i did billy are you the Original a Boy named SUE thought that was Johnny Cash
Loved your poem to billy, hope you remember the rest

Momac...Am sure it's Shakesperian.

Ta Mac..I`ll have a nosey there.